24. Must not tell any officer that I am smarter than they are, especially if it’* true.
There'* antecedent and pronoun disagreement. The correct version:
Must not tell any officer that I am smarter than he or she is, especially if this is true.
I also changed it'*
to this is
because I think the original implied that especially if one of them
, an it
, is true, Skippy must not tell it that he'* smarter.
And now for a random evil laugh picture to accompany the horror I have engaged with this grammatical correction.